Shipping Wars

I rate 4 stars for the vision because even though I like the drawing a lot because of its applicability but it needs more work. It uses a great deal of facial expression but it lacks body expression. I think it will be best to have more fluid movement and the body to suggest what is happening.

I rate 5 stars for originality because it shows Peridot being fought over by Lapis and Amethyst, something that never happened in the show. It also shows them fighting, which is something I never seen before.

I rate half star for technique because there is so much need for improvement. The lines must be more clean and the color must not overlap the lines. You should also add extra detail and make the characters look like they are actually struggling. If there was no color in Amethyst it will be hard to recognize her, so its best to make her more distinguishable.

I rate 5 stars for the impact because it looks really painful for Peridot. It has struggle and romance at the same time. It also looks shocking.

Overall it is a great work but it needs a lot of improvement. I suggest a redraw.